خواتي ممكن تقيمون المقطع إلي كاتبتنه .. بلييز .. محتاااااااايه تعليقاتكم عليه
وكم تعطوني لو كنتم أبلواتي 
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أترياااااااااا تعليقاتكم
My name is bint bilal, I am 18 years old, my nationality is Emirate, I live in small family with my mother, my 3 sisters and 2 brothers.
I have so many hobbies like: swimming, fishing, camping and reading actions stories, but my favorite hobby is writing. I like writing stories very much and nowadays I try to write a story about how can we save our society from the prostitution.
At the end I want to write about my dream, I always dream to become a writer, maybe because writing was my favorite hobby or maybe because I love my society and I want to serve it with my writing. So please wish me all the best and pray for me.
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Good Job ^.^
I would give you 4/5
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And excuse me for re-writing it,
hope i can help…
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My name is bint bilal, I am an 18 years old Emirati girl. I live in a small family with my mother, 3 sisters and 2 brothers.
Beside swimming, fishing, camping and reading suspense stories, writing have been always my favorite hobby. I enjoy writing stories a lot. Nowadays, I am writing a story about saving our society from the prostitution.
At last, I would like to bring up the reason behind dreaming of becoming a successful writer. As an Emirati girl, who loves her society, and cares a lot about its people, I would like to serve it and make it the best by the ideas and solutions in my writings. So please wish me all the best and pray for me.
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الله يوفقج يارب ويعطيج على قد نيــتج ^.^
والسمـــــــوحـــهـــ
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نصحيتي لج زيدي صفات للاسماء بتكون كتابتج ادق
تقبلي مروري
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة :DeheN 3ooD: 
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Good Job ^.^
I would give you 4/5
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And excuse me for re-writing it,
hope i can help…
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My name is bint bilal, I am an 18 years old Emirati girl. I live in a small family with my mother, 3 sisters and 2 brothers.
Beside swimming, fishing, camping and reading suspense stories, writing have been always my favorite hobby. I enjoy writing stories a lot. Nowadays, I am writing a story about saving our society from the prostitution.
At last, I would like to bring up the reason behind dreaming of becoming a successful writer. As an Emirati girl, who loves her society, and cares a lot about its people, I would like to serve it and make it the best by the ideas and solutions in my writings. So please wish me all the best and pray for me.
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الله يوفقج يارب ويعطيج على قد نيــتج ^.^
والسمـــــــوحـــهـــ
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أبلة دهن عود
مشكورة على تعقيبج الرائع والمفيد ..
وثانكس ع الدرجه الحلوة .. توقعت أقل من 4 .. ^_& الحمدلله رب العالمين
والمقطع إلي انت كاتبتنه خبااااااااااااااال وخبااااااااااااااال .. الله يوفقني و يقدرني إني أقدر أكتب شراته .. آمييين
وأشكرج مره ثانيه و الله يحفظج ..
تم حفظ المقطع إلي إنت كاتبتنه عسبت أدرب عليه
ع الدرجة الحلوة ^_^ ونتريا دروسج المتميزة
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ريم الحزوم الغالية ما فهمت شوو تقصدين هني ؟؟
أتريااااااااااااج
لما نقول إن البنت عمرها 18 سنة نقول :She is 18 years old نكتب السنوات بالجمع
لكن إذا كان العدد صفة للبنت فنقولها بالمفرد هكذا :I am an 18-year-old Emarati girl
وإذا كان عدد أفراد العائلة ستة فهي :a big family
القصص المشوقة يمكن أيضا ترجمتها :Thrillers
والكلمات العامة اللي مثل prostitution ما نستخدم معها the وهاذي من الاخطاء الشائعة لاننا نترجمها لا إراديا من العربية (الدعارة)
والافضل لما نتكلم عن المجتمع نقول members أفضل من كلمة people
وسامحونا يا بنات
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