السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
شحالكم وعساكم مرتاحين
فديتكم بليز باجر عليه امتحان وماعرف اكتب راينتغ بليز الله يخليكم بدعيلكم من كل قلبي
ابا رايتنغ عن الماضي واحد عن المستقبل وكلهم عن الاجازه يعني وين سرنا السمر ألي طاف بالماضي
وراتنغ الثاني عن الرحله ألي بنسيرها ها لصيف
الله يوفقكم دنيا وآخره
6 ولا رد بليز الله يخليكم ساعدوني
My last vacation was surprising for me. I went to malaysia with all my family. First, when I arrived at the hotel. I could know it. Second, when I swam in the pool. I could play with my family. Finally, when I arrived to the beach. I could meet new people. For these reasons my last vacation was very funny for me.
When I arrived to the hotel, I didnt know what I could do. First I decided to know my room. It had a lot of things and a terrace where I could see the beach. Then I went to know the pool it was beautiful and big. Then I talked with an employee, and she told me about the activities that I could do there. Consequently I knew that this hotel was wonderdful.
After that , when I was swiming in the pool with my family, it was funny. I played a lot of games. I went to an aerobics class in the pool for doing exercise. Then I played volley ball with my family. Later, I had a swiming race with my sister.
Next, when I played in the beach, it was relaxing for me.I played volley ball and soccer and I lost in both games. Then I rode a *****a in the sea and it was wonderful because I could see fish. Finally, I took the sun . Also I could eat different kinds of fish.
To conclude my last vacation was wonderful for me. I am never going to forget it. In particular because my family and I spent glad time full of hapiness and fun.
هذا عن لاست فكييشن الغلا واسمحيلي ع ل سبييلنق لوولز… حولي للفيوتشر عقب وخلاص…

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أحلى بنوته8
My last vacation was surprising for me. I went to malaysia with all my family. First, when I arrived at the hotel. I could know it. Second, when I swam in the pool. I could play with my family. Finally, when I arrived to the beach. I could meet new people. For these reasons my last vacation was very funny for me.
When I arrived to the hotel, I didnt know what I could do. First I decided to know my room. It had a lot of things and a terrace where I could see the beach. Then I went to know the pool it was beautiful and big. Then I talked with an employee, and she told me about the activities that I could do there. Consequently I knew that this hotel was wonderdful.
After that , when I was swiming in the pool with my family, it was funny. I played a lot of games. I went to an aerobics class in the pool for doing exercise. Then I played volley ball with my family. Later, I had a swiming race with my sister.
Next, when I played in the beach, it was relaxing for me.I played volley ball and soccer and I lost in both games. Then I rode a *****a in the sea and it was wonderful because I could see fish. Finally, I took the sun . Also I could eat different kinds of fish.
To conclude my last vacation was wonderful for me. I am never going to forget it. In particular because my family and I spent glad time full of hapiness and fun.
هذا عن لاست فكييشن الغلا واسمحيلي ع ل سبييلنق لوولز… حولي للفيوتشر عقب وخلاص…
تسلمين فديت روحج والله يوفقج دنيا واخره يااااااااااارب العالمين
الله يوفقج يالغالية.. والله لو شفت طلبج امس كنت بساعدج بس شفته متاخر للاسف*_^
بس ما قصرت احلى بنوتة,, يزاها الله خير

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رورو الامارات
تسلمين فديت روحج والله يوفقج دنيا واخره يااااااااااارب العالمين
حبيبتي هذا كله غلط و الجرامر واااايد غلط و الاسبلنغ بعد غلط مب مركبخه الجمل عدل
الله يوفقج الغاليه برفعلج الموضوع

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة شمايل_دبي
حبيبتي هذا كله غلط و الجرامر واااايد غلط و الاسبلنغ بعد غلط مب مركبخه الجمل عدل
الله يوفقج الغاليه برفعلج الموضوع
الغلا ترى كتبت الها انه فيه اغلاط فلسبليينق والبنت ع الاقل بتاخذ فكره عن الموضووع وبتعدله.. عندهاا امتحاان وحااولت اسااعدها بلي اقدر علييه ..
جان عدلتي الهاا الموضووع ولا كتبتي الهاا موضووع ثاني وسااعدتيهاا بطريقه ثانيه بدل لاتنتقديين الاغلاط
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